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Re: [httpapi] AD review of draft-ietf-httpapi-link-template-02

Mark Nottingham <mnot@mnot.net> Mon, 15 May 2023 16:20 UTC

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From: Mark Nottingham <mnot@mnot.net>
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Date: Mon, 15 May 2023 17:20:10 +0100
Cc: HTTP APIs Working Group <httpapi@ietf.org>, Darrel Miller <darrel@tavis.ca>, Richard Salz <rich.salz@gmail.com>, Francesca Palombini <francesca.palombini@ericsson.com>
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Subject: Re: [httpapi] AD review of draft-ietf-httpapi-link-template-02
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Hey,

Thanks. I've recorded these here:
  https://github.com/ietf-wg-httpapi/link-template/issues

Cheers,


P.S. Please don't use aliases -- they break DMARC.


> On 15 May 2023, at 11:09 am, Zaheduzzaman Sarker <zaheduzzaman.sarker@ericsson.com> wrote:
> 
> Hi all,
>  Thanks for the nice and small document. As a stand in AD for Francesca I have now reviewed the specification ( thanks for the patience here ). I have concluded that the document is ready to go for IETF Last call, as I don’t have any technical comments. I will start that process now.
>  I have two minor comments though and those can be incorporate as a part of IETF LC.
>  
>     • RFC 8288 ( it says - Link targets may need to be converted to URIs in order to express them in serialisations that do not support IRIs.) made me wonder if we should have an internationalization consideration section for this specification as well or at least refer to RFC 8288 for that matter. I would like to have other’s opinion here.
>     • I think the security consideration section should at least highlight key considerations when it is referring to other security sections in other RFCs.  It might be repetitive; however, it provides value to keep the awareness alive. I will let the author decide on this.
>  //Zahed


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