Re: I-D Action: draft-ietf-httpbis-immutable-01.txt

Amos Jeffries <squid3@treenet.co.nz> Wed, 15 March 2017 12:27 UTC

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On 14/03/2017 5:48 a.m., internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Hypertext Transfer Protocol of the IETF.
> 
>         Title           : HTTP Immutable Responses
>         Author          : Patrick McManus
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-httpbis-immutable-01.txt
> 	Pages           : 5
> 	Date            : 2017-03-13
> 
> Abstract:
>    The immutable HTTP response Cache-Control extension allows servers to
>    identify resources that will not be updated during their freshness
>    lifetime.  This assures that a client never needs to revalidate a
>    cached fresh resource to be certain it has not been modified.
> 
> 


One nit in section 2.1 line 1   s/whe /when /.

Otherwise it looks good to me :-)

Amos