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Re: Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-httpbis-bcp56bis-14: (with COMMENT)

Mark Nottingham <mnot@mnot.net> Thu, 26 August 2021 07:07 UTC

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From: Mark Nottingham <mnot@mnot.net>
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Subject: Re: Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-httpbis-bcp56bis-14: (with COMMENT)
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> On 26 Aug 2021, at 4:23 pm, Eric Vyncke (evyncke) <evyncke@cisco.com> wrote:
> 
>> -- Section 2 --
>> I am puzzled by the wording " The requirements in this document" in this BCP...
>> Should it rather be "The applicability of this document..." ?
> 
>    That would result in a construction like 'the applicability of this document is scoped to applications' which is a bit odd.
> 
> EV> "applicability" will not fly but I still think that "the requirements in this documents" does not fit a BCP. What about a last try "The recommendations in this document apply when..." ?

Excellent. See <https://github.com/httpwg/http-extensions/commit/edd7ac7f1>.


>> The following bullet list is unclear whether it is a "OR" or a "AND".
> 
>    Each entry (excepting the last) explicitly contains the word 'or'.
> 
> EV> indeed... it looks like that I may need new glasses ...

I am familiar with that feeling...

Cheers,


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