Adam Roach's Yes on draft-ietf-httpbis-immutable-03: (with COMMENT)

[Adam Roach <[e-mail]>]

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draft-ietf-httpbis-immutable-03: Yes

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COMMENT:
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Presumably, the "Note to Readers" section should be removed prior to
publication. Please either remove it, add a note to it that it should be
removed, or add an RFC editor note to this effect.

Trivial nits that aren't worth re-spinning the document before, but which you
may wish to consider if you have any other reasons to revise it:

- Put quotation marks around "immutable" in the abstract.

- Replace "assures" with "insures" in the abstract (or rephase along the lines
of "...assures the client that it never...").

- In the third paragraph of the Introduction, replace "Users that..." with
"Users who..."

- The cache control registry currently contains section numbers for every
citation. Would update section 4 to indicate: "[this document, section 2]"