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Re: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7232 (7308)

"Martin J. Dürst" <duerst@it.aoyama.ac.jp> Mon, 16 January 2023 03:15 UTC

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[Haven't seen any replies to this, sorry if I have missed some.]

This clearly should be rejected. The texts are just the translation into 
Spanish of what appears as explanations on the Errata report page.

Regards,   Martin.

On 2023-01-14 00:02, RFC Errata System wrote:
> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC7232,
> "Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Conditional Requests".
> 
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid7308
> 
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Editorial
> Reported by: Ignacio Alberto Rodríguez Villa <irodriguezvilla223@gmail.com>
> 
> 44372899
> 
> Original Text
> -------------
> donde Técnico es un error en el contenido técnico (esto incluye cambios en el uso de palabras clave RFC 2119) y Editorial es un error de ortografía, gramática, puntuación o sintaxis que no afecta el significado técnico.
> 
> Sección:
> 3344372899
> Texto original:
> Texto corregido:
> Notas:
> Ingrese cualquier nota explicativa o justificación para la corrección sugerida.
>   
> 
> 
> Corrected Text
> --------------
> donde Técnico es un error en el contenido técnico (esto incluye cambios en el uso de palabras clave RFC 2119) y Editorial es un error de ortografía, gramática, puntuación o sintaxis que no afecta el significado técnico.
> 
> Sección:
> 3344372899
> Texto original:
> Texto corregido:
> Notas:
> Ingrese cualquier nota explicativa o justificación para la corrección sugerida.
>   
> 
> 
> Notes
> -----
> donde Técnico es un error en el contenido técnico (esto incluye cambios en el uso de palabras clave RFC 2119) y Editorial es un error de ortografía, gramática, puntuación o sintaxis que no afecta el significado técnico.
> 
> Sección:
> 3344372899
> Texto original:
> Texto corregido:
> Notas:
> Ingrese cualquier nota explicativa o justificación para la corrección sugerida.
> 
> Instructions:
> -------------
> This erratum is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please
> use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or
> rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party
> can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary.
> 
> --------------------------------------
> RFC7232 (draft-ietf-httpbis-p4-conditional-26)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Conditional Requests
> Publication Date    : June 2014
> Author(s)           : R. Fielding, Ed., J. Reschke, Ed.
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : Hypertext Transfer Protocol Bis APP
> Area                : Applications
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG
>

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