Re: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7230 (4779)

Mark Nottingham <mnot@mnot.net> Fri, 19 August 2016 03:27 UTC

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Cc: Roy Fielding <fielding@gbiv.com>, "Julian F. Reschke" <julian.reschke@greenbytes.de>, Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com>, Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>, Alexey Melnikov <aamelnikov@fastmail.fm>, pmcmanus@mozilla.com, wrowe@rowe-clan.net, ietf-http-wg@w3.org
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This seems like an editorial improvement; the current text is reasonably clear (especially since this is just a summary of changes, not normative text). 

HOLD FOR UPDATE, I think.

Cheers,

> On 18 Aug 2016, at 7:42 PM, RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote:
> 
> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC7230,
> "Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Message Syntax and Routing".
> 
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=7230&eid=4779
> 
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Editorial
> Reported by: William A. Rowe Jr. <wrowe@rowe-clan.net>
> 
> Section: A.2.
> 
> Original Text
> -------------
>   [...] Non-US-ASCII content in header fields and the reason
>   phrase has been obsoleted and made opaque (the TEXT rule was
>   removed).  (Section 3.2.6)
> 
> Corrected Text
> --------------
>   [...] Non-US-ASCII content in header field values and the reason
>   phrase has been obsoleted and made opaque (the TEXT rule was
>   removed).  (Section 3.2.6)
> 
> Notes
> -----
> Section 3.2 plainly states header field names are token 
> (VCHARs less separators) as defined in 3.2.6. 
> 
> The "header fields" identified in this footnote are neither 
> clear nor correct.
> 
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> 
> --------------------------------------
> RFC7230 (draft-ietf-httpbis-p1-messaging-26)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP/1.1): Message Syntax and Routing
> Publication Date    : June 2014
> Author(s)           : R. Fielding, Ed., J. Reschke, Ed.
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : Hypertext Transfer Protocol Bis APP
> Area                : Applications
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG
> 

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