[Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7725 (5512)

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The following errata report has been submitted for RFC7725,
"An HTTP Status Code to Report Legal Obstacles".

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You may review the report below and at:
http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid5512

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Type: Editorial
Reported by: Curt Self <curtself.cs@gmail.com>

Section: 3

Original Text
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Note that in many cases clients can still access the denied resource
by using technical countermeasures such as a VPN or the Tor network.

Corrected Text
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(remove the sentence)

Notes
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I understand that the status code itself is kind of a joke (Fahrenheit 451), but the sentence above seems to have no place in a technical document. It provides no insight into use cases for either a client or implementing software.

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RFC7725 (draft-ietf-httpbis-legally-restricted-status-04)
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Title               : An HTTP Status Code to Report Legal Obstacles
Publication Date    : February 2016
Author(s)           : T. Bray
Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
Source              : Hypertext Transfer Protocol Bis
Area                : Applications and Real-Time
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG