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Re: New Version Notification for draft-bishop-httpbis-extended-settings-00.txt

Dee Holtsclaw <ldholtsclaw@gmail.com> Thu, 16 June 2016 21:14 UTC

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From: Dee Holtsclaw <ldholtsclaw@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 16 Jun 2016 17:09:55 -0400
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Picking nits, but shouldn't section 6's first paragraph read as follows:

   This draft establishes one new registry and *adds* three entries across
   two existing registries.

Existing text:

   This draft establishes one new registry and add three entries across
   two existing registries.


Otherwise it seems to be reasonable and complete to me. Nice work IMHO.

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