Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-httpbis-message-signatures-16
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Reviewer: Bo Wu Review result: Has Nits Hi, I have reviewed this document as an ops reviewer. This is a well written document. Some editorial nits: 1. Section 1.3 s/obs-folds/obs-fold 2. Section 2: s/Signture/Signature 3. Remove redundant "the": Section 2.1.3 If the value of the the HTTP field in question Section 4.1. The member's key is the label that uniquely identifies the message signature within the the HTTP message 4. 7.4.2 s/cacheing/caching Thanks, Bo Wu
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