Re: [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpbis-digest-headers-11
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From: Lucas Pardue <lucaspardue.24.7@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 01 Jun 2023 23:15:49 +0100
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To: Rob Sayre <sayrer@gmail.com>
Cc: Lars Eggert <lars@eggert.org>, Joel Halpern <jmh@joelhalpern.com>, gen-art@ietf.org, draft-ietf-httpbis-digest-headers.all@ietf.org, HTTP Working Group <ietf-http-wg@w3.org>, last-call@ietf.org
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Hi Rob, On Thu, 1 Jun 2023, 23:12 Rob Sayre, <sayrer@gmail.com> wrote: > Hi, > > I put up a PR: > https://github.com/httpwg/http-extensions/pull/2561 > > The current text is something one would hear in spoken American English, > but it's not usually done in writing, and it mixes pluralization and the > passive voice in an unidiomatic way. > > I'm not attached to my suggestion, but the current text is a bit off. > You're right. Thanks for the suggested alternative, it's clearer and more direct. Cheers Lucas
- Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpbis-dig… Joel Halpern via Datatracker
- Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpbis… Lucas Pardue
- Re: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-httpbis… Roberto Polli
- Re: [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-… Rob Sayre
- Re: [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-… Lucas Pardue