AD review of draft-ietf-httpbis-semantics-15, draft-ietf-httpbis-cache-15, draft-ietf-httpbis-messaging-15

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Hi all,

I have completed my review of the httpbis-core documents, and I have to thank the authors, the chairs and the working group for a very smooth reading session.

I don't have major comments, a couple of nits or request for clarifications on the semantics doc that I will post as issues to the github in the next couple of days, that the authors can address together with any other last call comments. 

Authors: please post v-16 to include the latest modifications from github, and I will then start the IETF LC.

Thanks,
Francesca