[hybi] Wordsmithing: draft-ietf-hybi-thewebsocketprotocol-17
Takeshi Yoshino <tyoshino@google.com> Mon, 03 October 2011 08:21 UTC
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Subject: [hybi] Wordsmithing: draft-ietf-hybi-thewebsocketprotocol-17
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1.1 revinventing -> reinventing (typo) 1.5 address; -> address (remove semicolon) 5.4 MUX -> multiplexing (be consistent) 7.1.4 tcp -> TCP 10.3 poisioning -> poisoning
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