Re: [I18ndir] I18ndir last call review of draft-carpenter-rfced-iab-charter-05
Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> Fri, 04 March 2022 20:01 UTC
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To: Takahiro Nemoto <nemo@go.tuat.ac.jp>, i18ndir@ietf.org
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From: Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [I18ndir] I18ndir last call review of draft-carpenter-rfced-iab-charter-05
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Thanks. That nit is noted and will be in the next version.
Regards
Brian Carpenter
On 05-Mar-22 00:49, Takahiro Nemoto via Datatracker wrote:
> Reviewer: Takahiro Nemoto
> Review result: Ready with Nits
>
> I am the assigned Internationalization Directorate (i18ndir) reviewer for this
> draft. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For
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> Summary:
> Looks fine except for one NIT.
> This document says nothing about internationalization.
> I did not find any internationalization issues with this document.
>
> NITs:
> In section 2, "(b) RFC Series and IANA" -> "(d) RFC Series and IANA"
>
>
- [I18ndir] I18ndir last call review of draft-carpe… Takahiro Nemoto via Datatracker
- Re: [I18ndir] I18ndir last call review of draft-c… Brian E Carpenter