Re: [I2nsf] Last Call: <draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm-26.txt> (I2NSF Consumer-Facing Interface YANG Data Model) to Proposed Standard
"Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong" <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com> Sun, 26 March 2023 07:29 UTC
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Date: Sun, 26 Mar 2023 16:28:54 +0900
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Subject: Re: [I2nsf] Last Call: <draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm-26.txt> (I2NSF Consumer-Facing Interface YANG Data Model) to Proposed Standard
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Hi Tom, I have addressed your comments on I2NSF Consumer-Facing Interface: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm-27 I attach a revision letter to explain how I have addressed your comments on the revision. Thanks. Best Regards, Paul On Sat, Mar 18, 2023 at 12:54 AM tom petch <daedulus@btconnect.com> wrote: > On 15/03/2023 11:32, tom petch wrote: > > On 02/03/2023 14:16, The IESG wrote: > >> > >> The IESG has received a request from the Interface to Network Security > >> Functions WG (i2nsf) to consider the following document: - 'I2NSF > >> Consumer-Facing Interface YANG Data Model' > >> <draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm-26.txt> as Proposed > >> Standard > > Belatedly I notice another area of divergence which makes the set of > documents incoherent and that is with threats. > > This I-D uses 'ioc' as a basis' from which is derived > > identity stix { > identity misp { > identity openioc { > identity iodef { > > Earlier versions used threaat feed with > > identity signature-yara { > identity signature-snort { > identity signature-suricata { > > and the capability I-D, with the RFC Editor, has > > identity content-security-control { > > from which are derived > > identity ips { > identity anti-virus { > > which give rise to > > identity signature-set { > identity exception-signature { > > and > > identity detect { > identity exception-files { > > I am unclear how the capabilities which can be configured in this I-D > are specified with the YANG identity of the capability I-D. A sentence > or two in this I-D explaining the relationship might clarify. > > Tom Petch > > > > This is one of a set of seven or so documents, one of which (framework) > > made RFC8329 six years ago, the others are waiting on MISSREF and then > > there is this one. It would be good to get these out as RFC. > > > > A problem I have seen with them is ideas changing with them, evolving, > > so that the I-D are out of step. As this is the last, this might be the > > place to address this. > > > > I have not had time, in the tsunami of I-D prior to IETF submission > > cut-off, to review this thoroughly but do see a divergence in the > > treatment of location. This used to be geo-ip, RFC8179, as is mentioned > > in RFC8329 and that is still referenced in e.g. nsf-facing. This I-D > > now uses country/region/city which is fine except for documents like > > 'capability' in the RFC-Editor Q which references RFC8179. The > > technically correct solution might be to update 'capability' etc but I > > think that the time for that is past. I put in some effort a few years > > ago to get them in line but no sooner had I done so than they diverged > > again after comments by other reviewers so I think that keeping them in > > line is a never ending task. > > > > What this I-D perhaps could do is to mention this divergence in > > treatment. I will look some more to see where else they have diverged > > but not before the end of thie Last Call. > > > > In passing, I note that the SIP example uses what might be genuine > > addresses. > > > > Tom Petch > > > >> The IESG plans to make a decision in the next few weeks, and solicits > >> final > >> comments on this action. Please send substantive comments to the > >> last-call@ietf.org mailing lists by 2023-03-16. Exceptionally, > >> comments may > >> be sent to iesg@ietf.org instead. In either case, please retain the > >> beginning > >> of the Subject line to allow automated sorting. > >> > >> Abstract > >> > >> > >> This document describes an information model and the corresponding > >> YANG data model for the Consumer-Facing Interface of the Security > >> Controller in an Interface to Network Security Functions (I2NSF) > >> system in a Network Functions Virtualization (NFV) environment. The > >> information model defines various types of managed objects and the > >> relationship among them needed to build the flow policies from > users' > >> perspective. This information model is based on the "Event- > >> Condition-Action" (ECA) policy model defined by a capability > >> information model for I2NSF, and the YANG data model is defined for > >> enabling different users of a given I2NSF system to define, manage, > >> and monitor flow policies within an administrative domain (e.g., > user > >> group). > >> > >> > >> > >> > >> The file can be obtained via > >> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm/ > >> > >> > >> > >> The following IPR Declarations may be related to this I-D: > >> > >> https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/3554/ > >> https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/3604/ > >> https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/5749/ > >> https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/5694/ > >> > >> > >> > >> > >> > >> > >> _______________________________________________ > >> IETF-Announce mailing list > >> IETF-Announce@ietf.org > >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf-announce > >> . > >> > > _______________________________________________ > I2nsf mailing list > I2nsf@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i2nsf >
- [I2nsf] Last Call: <draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-fac… The IESG
- Re: [I2nsf] Last Call: <draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer… tom petch
- Re: [I2nsf] Last Call: <draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer… tom petch
- Re: [I2nsf] Last Call: <draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer… Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong