[i2rs] Alvaro Retana's No Objection on draft-ietf-i2rs-rib-data-model-10: (with COMMENT)

Alvaro Retana <aretana.ietf@gmail.com> Tue, 03 April 2018 07:15 UTC

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Subject: [i2rs] Alvaro Retana's No Objection on draft-ietf-i2rs-rib-data-model-10: (with COMMENT)
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Alvaro Retana has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-i2rs-rib-data-model-10: No Objection

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(1) "This document defines a YANG data model for Routing Information Base (RIB)
that aligns with the I2RS RIB information model."  That and the multiple
references to the information model (in the text and on the e-mail archive)
make it a required document to understand for the implementation of the data
model.  draft-ietf-i2rs-rib-info-model should then be a Normative reference.

I am not making this point a DISCUSS because I think it is easy to solve: just
move the reference.

(2) In Figure 1: s/route-reason-definition/route-change-reason-definition

(3) For completeness: in S2.3, the Reason attribute is missing (from S4 in
draft-ietf-i2rs-rib-info-model).