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Re: [i2rs] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo-14

"Alexander Clemm" <ludwig@clemm.org> Wed, 26 July 2017 15:07 UTC

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From: Alexander Clemm <ludwig@clemm.org>
To: 'Susan Hares' <shares@ndzh.com>, 'Stewart Bryant' <stewart.bryant@gmail.com>, gen-art@ietf.org
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Subject: Re: [i2rs] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo-14
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Thank you, Stewart!

--- Alex

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From: i2rs [mailto:i2rs-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Susan Hares
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Subject: Re: [i2rs] Genart last call review of
draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo-14

Stewart: 

Thank you for your review!  To come back from IETF and immediately complete
your review shows awesome dedication!

Cheerily, Sue Hares

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Subject: [i2rs] Genart last call review of
draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo-14

Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review result: Ready with Nits

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review
Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for
the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call
comments.

For more information, please see the FAQ at

<https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Document: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo-14
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2017-07-25
IETF LC End Date: 2016-12-19
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary: Ready with a few minor English nits remaining.

Major issues: None

Minor issues: None

Nits/editorial comments: 

I notice that a number of the editorial comments in 

https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-i2rs-yang-network-topo-09-genar
t-lc-bryant-2016-12-12/

were not addressed, but I am sure the RFC Editor will pick them up.

I notice that RFC7952 is in the reference list but not called out in the
text.


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