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Re: [i2rs] Ignas Bagdonas' Discuss on draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-08: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)

Martin Bjorklund <mbj@tail-f.com> Tue, 03 April 2018 20:29 UTC

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Subject: Re: [i2rs] Ignas Bagdonas' Discuss on draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-dc-fabric-network-topology-08: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
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Hi,

Just a quick comment on the YANG doctor's review.

"Susan Hares" <shares@ndzh.com> wrote:
> Earlier feedback (rtg-dir, ops-dir, yang-doctors) on YANG suggested
> taking out the lengthy descriptions regarding logic and history.

It is very common that the YANG doctor review ask for *more* details
in the descriptions.  In general, we want the module to have as much
explanatory text as possible.  So was the case for the YD review for
this document as well; the YD wrote "The descriptions in all YANG
Modules are very short/terse."  That was for the -02 version, and even
the -00 version did not contain lengthy descriptions AFAICT.


/martin

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