Re: [i2rs] I-D Action: draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology-10.txt

[tom petch <[e-mail]>]

Qin

Looks good, mostly, but you still have

     import ieee802-dot1q-types {...      reference
        "IEEE Std 802.1Q-2017: Virtual Bridged Local Area Networks.";

as opposed to 802.1Qcp-2018  (as you probably know, the reference clause
needs the date to make the reference unique).

Tom Petch


----- Original Message -----
From: "Qin Wu" <[e-mail]>
Sent: Thursday, August 29, 2019 8:02 AM

> -v 10 is uploaded
> The diff is:
>
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topolo
gy-10
> I can spin on this draft another round if additional comments come
before the deadline of LC.
>
> -Qin
> -----邮件原件-----
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> 发送时间: 2019年8月29日 14:59
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> 主题: [i2rs] I-D Action:
draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology-10.txt
>
>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Interface to the Routing System WG of
the IETF.
>
>         Title           : A YANG Data Model for Layer-2 Network
Topologies
>         Authors         : Jie Dong
>                           Xiugang Wei
>                           Qin Wu
>                           Mohamed Boucadair
>                           Anders Liu
> Filename        : draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology-10.txt
> Pages           : 32
> Date            : 2019-08-28
>
> Abstract:
>    This document defines a YANG data model for Layer 2 network
>    topologies.
>
> Editorial Note (To be removed by RFC Editor)
>
>    Please update these statements within the document with the RFC
>    number to be assigned to this document:
>
>    o  "This version of this YANG module is part of RFC XXXX;"
>
>    o  "RFC XXXX: A YANG Data Model for Layer-2 Network Topologies";
>
>    o  reference: RFC XXXX
>
>    Please update the "revision" date of the YANG module.
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topolog
y/
>
> There are also htmlized versions available at:
>
https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topology-10
>
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-to
pology-10
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-i2rs-yang-l2-network-topolo
gy-10
>
>
> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
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