[Iasa20] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc7776bis-02: (with COMMENT)

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Subject: [Iasa20] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc7776bis-02: (with COMMENT)
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Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc7776bis-02: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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(1) +1 on Barry Leiba’s COMMENT about updating meta-data

(2) A few nits:
-- Multiple places.  Typo.  s/Adminstrative/Administrative/g
-- Section 2.3.  Consistent spacing/typo.  s/obmudsteam/Ombudsteam/.