[Iasa20] AD review of draft-ietf-iasa2-rfc7776bis-02

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Wed, 17 July 2019 14:08 UTC

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I reviewed this document in preparation for IETF last call. I believe it is ready to go, so I requested the last call. Please resolve the editorial issues noted in the shepherd write-up together with any last call comments.

Alissa