Re: [Iasa20] I-D Action: draft-arkko-iasa2-trust-update-00.txt

This looks good. Five Trustees looks OK to me. Some minor suggestions & nits:

Intended status should be BCP.

It would be simpler for future readers to incorporate most of RFC4371,
and obsolete 4371 rather than updating it. 4371 is very short, so only
a little cutting and pasting would be needed.

s/Nominations Committee/Nominating Committee/, for consistency
with RFC7437.

> A change to the Trust Agreement is required to effectuate this
> change, and this document request that the current Trustees make this
> change at their earliest convenience.

I suggest that "at their earliest convenience" should be changed to
"to coincide with the next available Nominating Committee cycle"
to avoid the need for interim arrangements.

Regards
   Brian Carpenter

On 28/06/2018 08:39, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> 
> 
>         Title           : Update to the Selection of Trustees for the IETF Trust
>         Authors         : Jari Arkko
>                           Ted Hardie
> 	Filename        : draft-arkko-iasa2-trust-update-00.txt
> 	Pages           : 4
> 	Date            : 2018-06-27
> 
> Abstract:
>    This memo updates the selection of trustees for the IETF Trust.
>    Previously, Administrative Oversight Committee (IAOC) members also
>    acted as trustees.  This memo specifies that the trustees shall be
>    selected separately.
> 
>    This memo updates RFCs 4071 and 4371 with regards to the selection of
>    trustees.  All other aspects of the IETF Trust remain as they are
>    today.
> 
> 
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