Re: [Iasa20] I-D Action: draft-ietf-iasa2-consolidated-upd-00.txt
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Subject: Re: [Iasa20] I-D Action: draft-ietf-iasa2-consolidated-upd-00.txt
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Generally I think this document takes the right approach to some necessary housekeeping. I just have some nits: > Obsoletes: 3716, 3929, 3979, 4633, 4879, > 8179 ... > For clarity, it also obsoletes RFCs 3716, 3929, > 3979, 4633, 4879, and 8179 which were Experimental or Informational Not 8179, I don't think! Also 3979 & 4879 are already obsoleted, so maybe: Obsoletes: 3716, 3929, 4633 ... For clarity, it also obsoletes RFCs 3716, 3929, and 4633 which were Experimental or Informational > 4. Where Appropriate, Replacement of the IETF Executive Director > position with the Managing Director, IETF Secretariat This section doesn't mention RFC2026. The references to the ED in 2026 are in fact superseded by RFC3979 and RFC8179. But maybe there should be an informational note about this. Maybe something like this after the bulleted list: Note that [RFC2026], The Internet Standards Process -- Revision 3, uses the term "IETF Executive Director" in text that was later obsoleted by [RFC3979]. Regards Brian
- [Iasa20] I-D Action: draft-ietf-iasa2-consolidate… internet-drafts
- Re: [Iasa20] I-D Action: draft-ietf-iasa2-consoli… Brian E Carpenter
- Re: [Iasa20] I-D Action: draft-ietf-iasa2-consoli… Livingood, Jason