[iccrg] small suggestions for bbr draft

Loganaden Velvindron <loganaden@gmail.com> Mon, 13 August 2018 16:32 UTC

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Subject: [iccrg] small suggestions for bbr draft
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While going through draft-cardwell-iccrg-bbr-congestion-control-00.

I noticed 2 small issues:

1) Reference to draft-ietf-tcpm-cubic which is now rfc8312.
2) Reference to draft-ietf-quic-transport-00 which is now at revision
draft-ietf-quic-transport-13.

I will send some other suggestions soon.