Re: [Id-event] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC9493 (7727)

Rebecca VanRheenen <rvanrheenen@amsl.com> Tue, 12 December 2023 17:05 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Id-event] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC9493 (7727)
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Greetings,

This errata reports a possible issue in Section 8.1. However, we note that the name of the registry appears several times in the document, not just in Section 8.1. We thus updated “Section 8.1” to “GLOBAL”. Please let us know any concerns. 

Thank you,
RFC Editor/rv


> On Dec 11, 2023, at 2:25 PM, RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote:
> 
> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC9493,
> "Subject Identifiers for Security Event Tokens".
> 
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid7727
> 
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Technical
> Reported by: Atul Tulshibagwale <atul@sgnl.ai>
> 
> Section: 8.1
> 
> Original Text
> -------------
> Security Event Identifier Formats Registry
> 
> Corrected Text
> --------------
> Subject Identifier Formats Registry
> 
> Notes
> -----
> The identifiers described in the RFC are relating to subject fields in Security Event Tokens, and not to the Security Event Tokens as a whole. This is clearly stated in the first sentence of Section 1 (Introduction) and the first sentence of the second paragraph of Section 1 (Introduction).
> 
> Therefore, the registry should be named "Subject Identifier Formats Registry", and not "Security Event Identifier Formats Registry".
> 
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> --------------------------------------
> RFC9493 (draft-ietf-secevent-subject-identifiers-18)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : Subject Identifiers for Security Event Tokens
> Publication Date    : December 2023
> Author(s)           : A. Backman, Ed., M. Scurtescu, P. Jain
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : Security Events
> Area                : Security
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG
>