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Re: [Id-event] Updates to draft-ietf-secevent-http-push

Yaron Sheffer <yaronf.ietf@gmail.com> Mon, 01 October 2018 20:37 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Id-event] Updates to draft-ietf-secevent-http-push
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Thank you Annabelle for the new draft.

One thing that caught my eye is that the error codes are duplicated 
between Sec. 2.4 and the IANA section. I am sure we can have the IANA 
section refer to Sec. 2.4 instead.

Regards,
	Yaron

On 01/10/18 16:13, Richard Backman, Annabelle wrote:
> Hello all,
> 
> You might have noticed that I published both an -01 and -02 version of 
> the Push-Based SET Token Delivery Using HTTP draft. The -01 update 
> focuses on the removal of redundant and/or unnecessary text. The -02 
> draft contains readability edits/rewrites of a few sections. I split 
> them out as two different drafts to provide an easier time diffing the 
> changes.
> 
> Note: per his request over email, I have removed Phil Hunt as author and 
> editor from the document.
> 
> -- 
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> Annabelle Richard Backman
> 
> AWS Identity
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