[Ideas] some comments on the requirement draft

"Liubingyang (Bryan)" <liubingyang@huawei.com> Sun, 19 March 2017 07:10 UTC

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From: "Liubingyang (Bryan)" <liubingyang@huawei.com>
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Subject: [Ideas] some comments on the requirement draft
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Thanks for the authors for the work. I think this doc is very important for specifying the difference between ideas/grids from related works.

I suggest that in the next version, there should be a figure sketching the module structure of GRIDS, including the layers and interfaces between GRIDS-IS, GRIDS-MS, and GRIDS-SS, as well as the external service interfaces. One detail comment is that GRIDS-IS might not be a perfect naming, since it is "id service - id service".

For REQ-MS-40, a companion requirement may be needed for authorization (like REQ-MS-30), which allows authorized client to update the access-control list.

For REQ-IS-10, it is better to explicitly show that length and structure are two independent dimensions.

I think "root-of-trust" is an important element, which need to appear in the next version.

Best
Bingyang