[Idr] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-idr-bgp-flowspec-oid-14: (with COMMENT)

Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Thu, 20 May 2021 07:04 UTC

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Subject: [Idr] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-idr-bgp-flowspec-oid-14: (with COMMENT)

Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-idr-bgp-flowspec-oid-14: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Section 6 refers to this draft as "this memo", while all other self-references
are "this document".  I suggest changing this section to match, or, in the
alternative, leave a note to the RFC Editor to remove the section.

In Section 7, the "SHOULD not" probably ought to be "SHOULD NOT".

[Idr] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ie… Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker
Re: [Idr] Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draf… Juan Alcaide (jalcaide)