Re: [Idr] WG Adoption call for draft-peng-idr-segment-routing-te-policy-attr-05 (9/26/2023-10/10/2023)

Nat Kao <pyxislx@gmail.com> Thu, 12 October 2023 10:09 UTC

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From: Nat Kao <pyxislx@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 12 Oct 2023 18:08:38 +0800
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Subject: Re: [Idr] WG Adoption call for draft-peng-idr-segment-routing-te-policy-attr-05 (9/26/2023-10/10/2023)
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Hi, All.

I support the adoption for this draft.
These segment types are useful for networks to identify specific
Adj-SIDs using alternate algorithms.

The alignment suggestions:
-For all segment types defined in this document, it might be better to
change "optional Algorithm" to "optional SR Algorithm" for better
alignment with RFC9256 & draft-ietf-idr-sr-segtypes-ext.
-In Sec. 3.1, is the paragraph "Other fields have the same ..."
redundant? It seems that all fields are defined already.
-In Sec. 3.1 for "Local Interface ID": it should be better to
reference RFC7752 instead of RFC8664 in this section.
 (ref: https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/idr/Nfa1-xwiwcysW-oTSRq0Z5BCWyQ/ )
-In Sec. 3.3, shouldn't the reference for "Local/Remote Interface ID"
be RFC7752 instead of RFC8402?

-I knew some terms don't align well between
draft-ietf-idr-bgp-sr-segtypes-ext and RFC9256(after -04 of
draft-filsfils-spring-segment-routing-policy)
However, these terms now appear in the same document, so it's better
to unify them for readability.
 *Sec. 3.1: "IPv4 Address", "IPv4 Prefix Address", and "IPv4 Node Address"
 *Sec. 3.2: "Local IPv4 Address"/"IPv4 Local Address" & "Remote IPv4
Address"/"IPv4 Remote Address"
 *Sec. 3.3/3.4: "IPv6 Prefix Address"/"IPv6 Local Node Address"/"Local
Prefix"/"Local IPv6 Address"
     & "IPv6 Remote Node Address"/"Remote Address"/"Remote IPv6 Address"

Thanks
Nat

On Wed, Sep 27, 2023 at 10:33 AM Susan Hares <shares@ndzh.com> wrote:
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> This begins a 2-week WG adoption call for
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> draft-peng-idr-segment-routing-te-policy-attr-05
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> (https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-peng-idr-segment-routing-te-policy-attr/)
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> In your comments, please indicate
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> “support” or “no support”.
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> Please also consider the following questions:
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> 1) Are these new segment types are useful for networks
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> Using alternate algorithms?
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> 2) This draft will need to align with the
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> draft-ietf-idr-segment-routing-te-policy
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> split into  draft-ietf-idr-segment-routing-te-policy
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> and draft-ietf-idr-sr-segtypes-ext-01.
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> Do you see any issues with this alignment?
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> Cheerily, Sue Hares
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