Re: [Idr] I-D Action: draft-ietf-idr-flowspec-redirect-rt-bis-01.txt

Hi Jeff,

Thanks for the update.

I just looked through the latest version and reviewed the Border Gateway Protocol (BGP) Extended Communities registry page.

Regarding the registry name, it's better to align with the definitions and conventions at the IANA registry web page (http://www.iana.org/assignments/bgp-extended-communities/bgp-extended-communities.xhtml). For example, the same Upper-lower case, with/without "BGP" at the beginning of a registry name.

Here some editorial change suggestions to the IANA section:

1.
OLD:
"
IANA is requested to update the BGP GENERIC TRANSITIVE EXPERIMENTAL
   USE EXTENDED COMMUNITY SUB-TYPES registry as follows:
"

NEW:
"IANA is requested to update the "Generic Transitive Experimental Use Extended Community Sub-Types" registry as follows:"

OLD:
"IANA is requested to update the BGP TRANSITIVE EXTENDED COMMUNITY
   TYPES registry as follows:"

NEW:
"
IANA is requested to update the "BGP Transitive Extended Community Types" registry as follows:
"

2.
OLD:
"
IANA is requested to create the GENERIC TRANSITIVE EXPERIMENTAL
   EXTENDED COMMUNITY PART 2 SUB-TYPES registry.  It should be seeded
   with the following Sub-Type:
"

NEW:
"
IANA is requested to create the "Generic Transitive Experimental Extended Community Part 2 Sub-Types" registry.  It should be seeded with the following Sub-Type:

3.
OLD:
"
   IANA is requested to create the GENERIC TRANSITIVE EXPERIMENTAL
   EXTENDED COMMUNITY PART 3 SUB-TYPES registry.  It should be seeded
   with the following Sub-Type:
"

NEW:
"
IANA is requested to create the "Generic Transitive Experimental Extended Community Part 3 Sub-Types" registry.  It should be seeded with the following Sub-Type:
"

Best regards,
Mach

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> Subject: [Idr] I-D Action: draft-ietf-idr-flowspec-redirect-rt-bis-01.txt
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> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
>  This draft is a work item of the Inter-Domain Routing Working Group of the IETF.
> 
>         Title           : Clarification of the Flowspec Redirect Extended
> Community
>         Author          : Jeffrey Haas
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-idr-flowspec-redirect-rt-bis-01.txt
> 	Pages           : 5
> 	Date            : 2014-10-20
> 
> Abstract:
>    This document clarifies the formatting of the the BGP Flowspec
>    Redirect Extended Community, originally documented in RFC 5575
>    (Dissemination of Flow Specification Rules).
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-idr-flowspec-redirect-rt-bis/
> 
> There's also a htmlized version available at:
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> 
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