[Idr] Robert Wilton's No Objection on draft-ietf-idr-flow-spec-v6-19: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: [Idr] Robert Wilton's No Objection on draft-ietf-idr-flow-spec-v6-19: (with COMMENT)
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Robert Wilton has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-idr-flow-spec-v6-19: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-idr-flow-spec-v6/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Hi, Thank you for this document. Even without the specific domain knowledge I found this document easy to read and understand. A couple of minor comments that you may wish to consider: 3. IPv6 Flow Specification components Types 4, 5, 6, 9, 10 and 11, as defined in [I-D.ietf-idr-rfc5575bis], also apply to IPv6. Also giving the descriptive names for these types might aid the reader here. 3.3. Type 3 - Upper-Layer Protocol This component uses the Numeric Operator (numeric_op) described in [I-D.ietf-idr-rfc5575bis] Section 4.2.1.1. Type 3 component values SHOULD be encoded as single octet (numeric_op len=00). The "(numeric_op len=00)" threw me off at first, until I referenced back to section 4.2.1.1. Possibly, this might be more clear as "(i.e., numeric_op len field=00)". Obviously, if you decide to change this, then there are other places that need to be updated as well. 3.4. Type 7 - ICMPv6 Type The text wasn't super clear to me whether the a Type 3 componet could/should be specified to match protocol-value 58 as well as a Type 7 field. I would presume that either is allowed, but I was unsure whether it might be helpful to clarify this further. Regards, Rob
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