[Idr] AD-review comments on draft-ietf-idr-bgp4-experience-protocol-03.txt
Alex Zinin <zinin@psg.com> Thu, 15 April 2004 03:07 UTC
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Folks- I'm generally quite happy with this document. The only comment I had was about the way the 2119 requirements language is used. In some places (simple search for "MUST" would reveal), the document reads as defining protocol procedures, which should be in the protocol spec. If the intention is to quote the spec, the wording should be changed accordingly. Refs to SBGP and SoBGP should be filled in. Thanks. Alex _______________________________________________ Idr mailing list Idr@ietf.org https://www1.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/idr