[Idr] Changes to draft-ietf-idr-ls-distribution
"Adrian Farrel" <adrian@olddog.co.uk> Sun, 04 October 2015 20:57 UTC
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From: Adrian Farrel <adrian@olddog.co.uk>
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As promised, here is an explanation of the changes for -12 of this draft. - Hannes' coordinates changed - Section 3.1. Explain how to order TLVs of the same type. - Section 3.2. Remove colloquialism. - Section 3.2. Add reference to RFC 4364 for Route Distinguishers. - Change 'static' to 'static configuration'. - Section 3.2.1. Fix reference and remove colloquialism. - Section 3.2.1.2. Clarify which NLRIs are meant. - Fix "NRLI" to "NLRI". - Section 3.3.1.1. Add R and V bits from OSPFv3. - Fix "LINK_STATE Attribute" to "BGP-LS attribute with a link NLRI". - Section 3.3.2.2. Wordsmithing. - Section 3.3.2.3. Wordsmithing. - Section 3.3.3.4. Add section reference for pointer to RFC 5305. - Section 3.7. Fix IP addresses. - Section 5. Remove instruction to RFC Editor. - Section 5.1. New subsection. - Section 6.2.1. Complete rewrite. - draft-ietf-idr-error-handling is now RFC 7606. - Section 6.2.3. Fix reference. - Section 6.2.5. Add paragraph on time-based measurements. - Fiddle with references. Cheers, Adrian
- [Idr] Changes to draft-ietf-idr-ls-distribution Adrian Farrel
- Re: [Idr] Changes to draft-ietf-idr-ls-distributi… Alvaro Retana (aretana)
- Re: [Idr] Changes to draft-ietf-idr-ls-distributi… Adrian Farrel