Re: [Idr] I-D Action: draft-lapukhov-bgp-ecmp-considerations-06.txt

Dear Authors,

Thanks for the updated draft and the work which I think is very useful.

I did read the draft just now and have a few textual suggestions;

- Section 3: "...all iBGP paths from the the ECMP candidates set..." -->
remove 1x "the"

- Section 4: "...as "skip igp check" ." --> Remove space between " and .

- Section 4: "...IGP cost ." --> remove space between cost and .

- Section 4: "nessesary" --> replace with "necessary"

- Section 4: "deplyments" --> replace with "deployments"

- Section 8: "implementaion" --> replace with "implementation"

Cheers,

Melchior

On Mon, May 24, 2021 at 6:40 PM <internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:

>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
>
>
>         Title           : Equal-Cost Multipath Considerations for BGP
>         Authors         : Petr Lapukhov
>                           Jeff Tantsura
>         Filename        : draft-lapukhov-bgp-ecmp-considerations-06.txt
>         Pages           : 7
>         Date            : 2021-05-24
>
> Abstract:
>    BGP (Border Gateway Protocol) [RFC4271] employs tie-breaking logic to
>    select a single best path among multiple paths available, known as
>    BGP best path selection.  At the same time, it has become a common
>    practice to allow for "equal-cost multipath" (ECMP) selection and
>    programming of multiple next-hops in routing tables.  This document
>    summarizes some common considerations for the ECMP logic when BGP is
>    used as the routing protocol, with the intent of providing common
>    reference for otherwise unstandardized set of features.
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-lapukhov-bgp-ecmp-considerations/
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> There is also an htmlized version available at:
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> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-lapukhov-bgp-ecmp-considerations-06
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> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-lapukhov-bgp-ecmp-considerations-06
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