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Subject: [Idr] Shepherd report on draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-sr-policy-00
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This is a shepherd report for draft-ietf-idr-bgp-ls-sr-policy-00.

This draft will need to be adjusted after draft-ietf-idr-segment-routing-te-policy is split into two drafts.

Why?: draft-ietf-idr-segment-routing-te-policy is an informative reference.

Other-things to fix:

Section 5.2 -

U-flag - specify what the flag means when the bit is zero.

Section 7.0

Thank you for putting RFC7752bis in this document.
I recommend you consider adding a bit more text prior to WG LC.
Consider issues on rapid change and detection.

Section 9.0

This section needs upgrading to present the likely problems.
At least you should consider what RFC7752bis issues have been closed.

I will add this to the early review queue as soon as the draft-ietf-idr-segment-routing-te-policy is completed.

Cheers,  Sue

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