RE: [Ieprep] I-D ACTION:draft-ietf-ieprep-ets-telephony-03.txt

Two very minor comments.

In section 3, item 5, the first sentence says "best available" but the last
sentence says "better than best effort".  Is this intended, or is the second
one also supposed to be "best available"?

In section 5, the first sentence appears to be missing a ")" at the end.

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A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
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This draft is a work item of the Internet Emergency Preparedness Working
Group of the IETF.

	Title		: IP Telephony Requirements for Emergency 
                          Telecommunication Service
	Author(s)	: K. Carlberg, R. Atkinson
	Filename	: draft-ietf-ieprep-ets-telephony-03.txt
	Pages		: 6
	Date		: 2003-4-18

This document presents a list of requirements in support of Emergency
Telecommunications Service (ETS) within the context of IP telephony.
It is an extension to the general requirements presented in [3].
Solutions to these requirements are not presented in this document.

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