Re: [ietf-smtp] To trace field or not to trace field

Dave Crocker <dhc@dcrocker.net> Mon, 15 February 2021 18:15 UTC

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On 2/15/2021 10:02 AM, Dave Crocker wrote:
> Here is the revised text:



I've also revised the introductory text to the section showing an example:

    <section title="Multi-hop Example">

    <t>The Delivered-To: header field can indicate a sequence of
deliveries, as demonstrated by this example, which has a message
traveling through a mailing list, on through an alias, and then reaching
final delivery...


I should note meta-point about specification writing...

The original draft had a single example header.  Barry suggested making 
it show a sequence.  I've been impressed with the difference.

So my new meta-rule is that defining something that has relevance to a 
sequence should include an example that demonstrates the sequence.



d/

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Dave Crocker
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