RE: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pcp-upnp-igd-interworking-07
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From: mohamed.boucadair@orange.com
To: Peter Yee <peter@akayla.com>, "draft-ietf-pcp-upnp-igd-interworking.all@tools.ietf.org" <draft-ietf-pcp-upnp-igd-interworking.all@tools.ietf.org>
Date: Thu, 11 Apr 2013 07:43:53 +0200
Subject: RE: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pcp-upnp-igd-interworking-07
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Dear Peter, The new version is now available online. A diff is available here: http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-pcp-upnp-igd-interworking-08. Thank you again for the review. Cheers, Med >-----Message d'origine----- >De : Peter Yee [mailto:peter@akayla.com] >Envoyé : mercredi 10 avril 2013 18:47 >À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed OLNC/OLN; draft-ietf-pcp-upnp-igd- >interworking.all@tools.ietf.org >Cc : gen-art@ietf.org; ietf@ietf.org >Objet : RE: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pcp-upnp-igd-interworking-07 > >Med, > > That looks great. Thanks for accommodating my concern. > > Kind regards, > -Peter > >-----Original Message----- >From: mohamed.boucadair@orange.com [mailto:mohamed.boucadair@orange.com] >Sent: Wednesday, April 10, 2013 12:49 AM >To: Peter Yee; draft-ietf-pcp-upnp-igd-interworking.all@tools.ietf.org >Cc: gen-art@ietf.org; ietf@ietf.org >Subject: RE: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pcp-upnp-igd-interworking-07 > >Dear Peter, > >I changed the text as follows: > >OLD: > > If the requested external port is not available, the PCP server will > send a CANNOT_PROVIDE_EXTERNAL error response. If a short lifetime > error is returned, the IGD-PCP IWF MAY re-send the same request to > the PCP Server after 30 seconds. If a PCP error response is > received, the IGD-PCP IWF relays a negative message to the UPnP > Control Point with ConflictInMappingEntry as the error code. > >NEW: > > If the requested external port is not available, the PCP server will > send a CANNOT_PROVIDE_EXTERNAL error response: > > 1. If a short lifetime error is returned, the IGD-PCP IWF MAY resend > the same request to the PCP Server after 30 seconds without > relaying the error to the UPnP Control Point. The IGD-PCP IWF > MAY repeat this process until a positive answer is received or > some maximum retry limit is reached. When the maximum retry > limit is reached, the IGD-PCP IWF relays a negative message to > the UPnP Control Point with ConflictInMappingEntry as the error > code. > > 2. If a long lifetime error is returned, the IGD-PCP IWF relays a > negative message to the UPnP Control Point with > ConflictInMappingEntry as the error code. > >Better? > >Cheers, >Med > >>-----Message d'origine----- >>De : Peter Yee [mailto:peter@akayla.com] Envoyé : mardi 9 avril 2013 >>20:58 À : BOUCADAIR Mohamed OLNC/OLN; draft-ietf-pcp-upnp-igd- >>interworking.all@tools.ietf.org Cc : gen-art@ietf.org; ietf@ietf.org >>Objet : RE: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pcp-upnp-igd-interworking-07 >> >>Med, >> Thanks for the swift response to my review. See my one reply >inline. >> >> Kind regards, >> -Peter >> >>>>Page 13, 1st paragraph, 3rd sentence: what's meant here is if any PCP >>>>error other than a short-lifetime error, or in the case of a failed >>>>resend, any PCP error at all. The wording makes it seem like the >>>>short-lifetime errors are somehow not PCP errors and is therefore >>>>confusing. It also doesn't explicitly deal with how many repeats >>>>should >>be done on a resend. >> >>>[Med] The basic behavior is to relay the received error to the UPnP CP. >>For >>the short-lifetime errors, the IWF may decide to resend the request and >>not relay those errors immediately to the UPnP CP. The number of >>repeats is not specified here as it can be implementation-specific. >> >>Your explanation is fine. I just found the wording "If a PCP error >>response is received" to sound ambiguously as if the short-lifetime >>errors were not a subset of PCP errors. >> >
- Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pcp-upnp-igd-interwo… Peter Yee
- RE: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pcp-upnp-igd-int… mohamed.boucadair
- RE: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pcp-upnp-igd-int… Peter Yee
- RE: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pcp-upnp-igd-int… mohamed.boucadair
- RE: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pcp-upnp-igd-int… Peter Yee
- RE: Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-pcp-upnp-igd-int… mohamed.boucadair
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