Gen-ART LC/Telechat review of draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-client-link-layer-addr-opt-04
Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> Mon, 25 February 2013 23:28 UTC
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Subject: Gen-ART LC/Telechat review of draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-client-link-layer-addr-opt-04
Date: Mon, 25 Feb 2013 17:28:06 -0600
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at < http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft. Document: draft-ietf-dhc-dhcpv6-client-link-layer-addr-opt-04 Reviewer: Ben Campbell Review Date: 2013-02-25 IETF LC End Date: 2013-02-28 IESG Telechat date: 2013-02-28 Summary: Ready for publication as a proposed standard Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: -- Header: I ca't help but enjoy the fact that the file name is longer than the draft title :-) (No change needed) -- section 2, last paragraph: s/"For e.g."/"For example,"
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