Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-l3vpn-as4octet-ext-community-03
Ben Campbell <ben@estacado.net> Tue, 30 June 2009 22:01 UTC
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Subject: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-l3vpn-as4octet-ext-community-03
Date: Tue, 30 Jun 2009 17:01:05 -0500
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I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-l3vpn-as4octet-ext-community-03 Reviewer: Ben Campbell Review Date: 2009-06-30 IETF LC End Date: 2009-07-07 IESG Telechat date: (if known) Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a proposed standard. I have a couple of comments that may be worth addressing if there is other reason to revise the draft. Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: -- Abstract: "...allows to carry 4 octet autonomous system numbers" Missing word(s)? -- Introduction There's no motivational text. A paragraph describing (very briefly) why you would want 4 octet extended communities might be helpful.
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