Followup on Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-mext-binding-revocation (was Re: Gen-ART LC and Telechat Review of draft-ietf-mext-binding-revocation-10)

[Ben Campbell <[e-mail]>]

Hi,

This is a followup of my Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-mext-binding- 
revocation, updated based on revision 13 of that draft.

This revision addresses all of my substantive issues, and most of the  
editorial issues. I had one outstanding minor editorial comment where  
the author proposed a specific change, but that change did not make it  
into revision 13 as far as I can tell:

>>
>> -- Section 11, (InitMINDelayBRIs) (I think I commented on 
>> this, but can't find the resolution)
>>
>> Did you intend for the _default_ to be a range (between .5
>> and 1 sec), or did you mean to say the default was 1 second,
>> and it must not be configured to less than .5 seconds? I
>> suspect the latter, but it's not clear from the text.
>
> [Ahmad]
> Sure, will fix this as follows:
>
>   Initial Minimum Delay Between BRI messages (InitMINDelayBRIs)
>
>      This variable specifies the initial delay timeout in seconds
>      before the revoking mobility entity retransmits a BRI message.
>      The default is 1 second but not to be configured less than 0.5
> seconds.

Revision 13 still appears to have the old text.


Thanks!

Ben.