Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-avt-rtp-jpeg2000-beam-09.txt
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I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html). Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-avt-rtp-jpeg2000-beam-09.txt Reviewer: David Black Review Date: 15 March 2008 IETF LC End Date: 15 March 2008 Summary: This draft is on the right track, but has open issues, described in the review. Comments: There are two open issues, both of which should be fairly easy to address: [1] Section 3.2 doesn't provide enough information to calculate a packet priority value from layer, resolution and component values. In fact the example it gives appears to be simple enough to also be an example of the component based ordering defined in Section 3.5. Section 3.2 needs to explain how the priority value is calculated and use a more complex example to illustrate the results of the calculation. [2] Section 4.1 contains this problematic text: An initial value of mh_id MUST be selected randomly between 1 and 7 for security reasons. This needs to be explained, and "security" is probably the wrong word. Any security that depends on this random choice is likely to be easily subverted by the adversary trying all 7 possible values. Nits: As noted by IANA, Section 7.2 doesn't contain any IANA actions and hence probably should not be a subsection of the IANA Considerations section (7) Reference [1] should reference the Internet Draft by name. [1] Futemma, "RTP Payload Format for JPEG 2000 Video Streams", RFC XXXY, April 2007. I believe this is draft-ietf-avt-rtp-jpeg2000-18.txt. That should be in the reference instead of RFC XXXY. Then add an RFC Editor note asking the RFC Editor to replace all instances of RFC XXXY with the RFC number assigned when reference [1] is published as an RFC. idnits 2.08.04 found this problem with reference [1] and was confused by reference [3]. Reference [3] is fine as-is; no change is needed. Thanks, --David ---------------------------------------------------- David L. Black, Distinguished Engineer EMC Corporation, 176 South St., Hopkinton, MA 01748 +1 (508) 293-7953 FAX: +1 (508) 293-7786 black_david@emc.com Mobile: +1 (978) 394-7754 ---------------------------------------------------- _______________________________________________ IETF mailing list IETF@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ietf