Gen-ART Telechat Review of draft-ietf-ospf-ospfv3-iid-registry-update-03

Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> Fri, 19 April 2013 21:03 UTC

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Document:  draft-ietf-ospf-ospfv3-iid-registry-update-03
Reviewer: Ben Campbell
Review Date: 2013-04-19
IESG Telechat date: 2013-04-25

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a proposed standard. All of the comments from my review of 00 at last call have been addressed.

Major issues:

None.

Minor issues:

None.

Nits/editorial comments:

-- The abstract should mention that this draft now updates RFC 5838.

-- IDNits has a comment about the lack of pre-5378 work boilerplate that I do not think is valid in this case--but it might be worth checking.