RE: [OPS-DIR] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-iasa2-consolidated-upd-07
Sheng Jiang <jiangsheng@huawei.com> Tue, 09 April 2019 06:10 UTC
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Subject: RE: [OPS-DIR] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-iasa2-consolidated-upd-07
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Date: Tue, 09 Apr 2019 06:09:52 +0000
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Sorry for the mistake. Review result: Ready. Sheng -----Original Message----- From: OPS-DIR [mailto:ops-dir-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Sheng Jiang via Datatracker Sent: Tuesday, April 9, 2019 11:28 AM To: ops-dir@ietf.org Cc: draft-ietf-iasa2-consolidated-upd.all@ietf.org; iasa20@ietf.org; ietf@ietf.org Subject: [OPS-DIR] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-iasa2-consolidated-upd-07 Reviewer: Sheng Jiang Review result: Ready Reviewer: Sheng Jiang Review result: Has Issues Hi, OPS-DIR, Authors, I have reviewed this document as part of the Operational directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written with the intent of improving the operational aspects of the IETF drafts. Comments that are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG review. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. This BCP document provides updates to several position titles by IETF Administrative Support Activity 2.0 (IASA2.0) structure, and organizational relationships that are referenced elsewhere, and deprecates some now-obsolete documents to ensure that there is no confusion due to these changes. It is clear and well written. It is ready for publication. Major issue: no. Minor issue: no. Regards, Sheng _______________________________________________ OPS-DIR mailing list OPS-DIR@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/ops-dir
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