Gen-ART Last Call Review of draft-ietf-sidr-pfx-validate-09
Pete McCann <mccap@petoni.org> Mon, 01 October 2012 22:56 UTC
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Subject: Gen-ART Last Call Review of draft-ietf-sidr-pfx-validate-09
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
you may receive.
Document: draft-ietf-sidr-pfx-validate-09
Reviewer: Peter McCann
Review Date: 2012-10-01
IETF LC End Date: 2012-10-01
IESG Telechat date: unknown
Summary: Ready
Major issues: None
Minor issues:
Section 4:
An "affected prefix" is any prefix that
was matched by a deleted or updated mapping, or could be matched by
an added mapping.
SHOULD BE:
An "affected prefix" is any prefix that
was matched by a deleted or updated mapping, or could be matched by
an added or updated mapping.
Nits/editorial comments:
Abstract:
monkey-in-the-middle
That's a game of keep-away. Did you mean man-in-the-middle? Perhaps
this is a technical term that has been discussed on the mailing list.
- Gen-ART Last Call Review of draft-ietf-sidr-pfx-v… Pete McCann
- Re: Gen-ART Last Call Review of draft-ietf-sidr-p… John Scudder