OPS-Dir review of draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-12.txt

"Black, David" <david.black@emc.com> Wed, 18 February 2015 00:39 UTC

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From: "Black, David" <david.black@emc.com>
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Subject: OPS-Dir review of draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-12.txt
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Hi Albert,

> We have posted an updated version of draft-lisp-introduction hopefully addressing all the comments besides UDP Zero.

I’ve scanned the diff wrt the -11 version, and it does look like all the comments have been addressed besides the one on UDP zero checksums for IPv6.  I’m going to walk away from that comment, as there is some rationale for that design decision in the existing draft text, and moreover, the primary responsibility for that explanation falls on the LISP protocol RFCs that have already been approved by the IESG.

Hence, I think this -12 version of the introduction draft is good to go. Thank you to you and the other authors for addressing the comments in a thorough fashion and for doing so even though they arrived after the conclusion of IETF Last Call on this draft.


From: Albert Cabellos [mailto:albert.cabellos@gmail.com]
Sent: Tuesday, February 17, 2015 7:28 PM
To: ops-dir@ietf.org; Black, David; lisp@ietf.org
Cc: Damien Saucez; Luigi Iannone; Joel Halpern; Brian Haberman
Subject: Fwd: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-12.txt

Hi all

We have posted an updated version of draft-lisp-introduction hopefully addressing all the comments besides UDP Zero.

Please let us know if this is not the case.

Kind Regards


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Subject: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-12.txt
To: Damien Saucez <damien.saucez@inria.fr<mailto:damien.saucez@inria.fr>>, Albert Cabellos-Aparicio <acabello@ac.upc.edu<mailto:acabello@ac.upc.edu>>

A new version of I-D, draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-12.txt
has been successfully submitted by Albert Cabellos and posted to the
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Name:           draft-ietf-lisp-introduction
Revision:       12
Title:          An Architectural Introduction to the Locator/ID Separation Protocol (LISP)
Document date:  2015-02-17
Group:          lisp
Pages:          28
URL:            http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-12.txt
Status:         https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-lisp-introduction/
Htmlized:       http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-12
Diff:           http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-lisp-introduction-12

   This document describes the architecture of the Locator/ID Separation
   Protocol (LISP), making it easier to read the rest of the LISP
   specifications and providing a basis for discussion about the details
   of the LISP protocols.  This document is used for introductory
   purposes, more details can be found in RFC6830, the protocol

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