Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-ip-pw-capability-07

"Roni Even" <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> Tue, 06 May 2014 05:52 UTC

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Subject: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-ip-pw-capability-07
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
<http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you
may receive.

Document:  draft-ietf-mpls-ldp-ip-pw-capability-07

Reviewer: Roni Even

Review Date:2014-5-6

IETF LC End Date: 2014-5-12

IESG Telechat date: 

 

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as Standard track RFC.

 

 

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Nits/editorial comments:

I was wondering if this document should say that it updates RFC5561
(specifically section 10)