Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-trill-cmt-08
"Roni Even" <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com> Fri, 02 October 2015 15:27 UTC
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Subject: Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-trill-cmt-08
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you may receive. Document: draft-ietf-trill-cmt-08 Reviewer: Roni Even Review Date:2015-10-2 IETF LC End Date: 2015-10-5 IESG Telechat date: Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Standard Track RFC. Major issues: Minor issues: Nits/editorial comments: In section 4.1 last paragraph "that are do not support" should be "that do not support"