Re: [lemonade] Gen-ART review of draft-ietf-lemonade-convert-17.txt

Black_David@emc.com wrote:

>Alexey,
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Hi David,

>Thank you for your prompt response.
>
>Keeping the To: and Subject: lines in the IANA registration
>in Section 11.1 is fine since they are in RFC 2506, and
>RFC 2506 is noted in that section as having established
>the registry.  Please consider adding an informative
>reference to RFC 2506, but this is not essential.
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It is already a normative reference in the draft:

   [MEDIAFEAT-REG]
              Holtman, K., Mutz, A., and T. Hardie, "Media Feature Tag
              Registration Procedure", BCP 31, RFC 2506, March 1999.

>Thanks,
>--David
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>>Black_David@emc.com wrote:
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>>>I have been selected as the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) 
>>>reviewer for this draft (for background on Gen-ART, please see 
>>>http://www.alvestrand.no/ietf/gen/art/gen-art-FAQ.html).
>>>
>>>Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
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>>>you may receive. 
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>>>Document: draft-ietf-lemonade-convert-17.txt
>>>Reviewer: David L. Black
>>>Review Date: 15 April 2008
>>>IETF LC End Date: 16 April 2008
>>> 
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>>Hi David,
>>Thank you for your review.
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>>>Summary: 
>>>This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that
>>>should be fixed before publication.
>>>
>>>Comments:
>>>This is a generally well-written draft on the CONVERT extension
>>>to IMAP.  All of these comments are minor nits.
>>>
>>>In Section 2, please remove this convention:
>>>  [[anchor3: Editorial comments and questions are marked like
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>this.]]
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>>Done.
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>>>p.10 contains a couple of example email addresses.  Please use
>>>example.com, example.net or example.org as the domain.
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>>Somebody else complained about this earlier, so I've already fixed
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>this 
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>>in my copy.
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>>>In Section 11.1 are the To: and Subject: lines needed as part of
>>>the IANA registration?  If not, please remove them.
>>> 
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>>They are a part of the IANA template in RFC 2506, so I would rather
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>keep 
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>>them
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>>>In the IANA registration in Section 11.1, please ask IANA to
>>>replace RFC XXXX by the RFC number assigned to this draft.
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>>Ok.
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>>>idnits 2.08.05 got confused by the square brackets used in IMAP
>>>syntax and reported a number of potential reference problems -
>>>there are no actual problems.
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>>Indeed.
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