Re: Last Call: <draft-kucherawy-authres-spf-erratum-01.txt> (Authentication-Results Registration Update for SPF Results) to Proposed Standard

[SM <[e-mail]>]

At 13:22 06-01-2012, The IESG wrote:
>The IESG has received a request from an individual submitter to consider
>the following document:
>- 'Authentication-Results Registration Update for SPF Results'
>   <draft-kucherawy-authres-spf-erratum-01.txt> as a Proposed Standard

Summary: I support the publication of this draft.

As a editorial nit, the Introduction Section mentions that the memo 
updates the IANA registries.  Erratum # 2617 is also about Section 
2.4.2.  I suggest changing the heading of Section 3 to "Update to 
Section 2.4.2 of RFC 5451" and some rewording of the paragraph:

  The "hardfail" result value for [SPF] (and thus also for [SENDER-ID])
  in Section 2.4.2 of RFC 5451 is replaced with the "fail" result value.

    fail: This client is explicitly not authorized to inject or relay
          mail using the sender's DNS domain.

Note that the update affects the example in Appendix B.5.

Regards,
-sm