Re: [NSIS] Last Call: draft-ietf-nsis-rmd (RMD-QOSM - The Resource Management in Diffserv QOS Model) to Experimental RFC

[Gerald Ash <[e-mail]>]

One more comment:
 
Section 3.1 of the QSPEC draft http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-nsis-qspec-24#section-3.1 lists requirements for QOSM specifications including "QNE processing rules describing how QSPEC information is treated and interpreted"and "at least one bit-level QSPEC example".
 
While the RMD draft has examples in Appendix A of individual processing functions, there is no overall, end-to-end example given of QSPEC composition and processing from QNI to QNR and back again.  IMO this would greatly help an overall understanding of RMD functionality.
 
Such QSPEC processing examples are given in Sections 4.4 ("Processing Example") and 4.5 ("Bit-Level QSPEC Example") of the Y.1541-QOSM draft (http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-nsis-y1541-qosm-10#section-4.4)
and
Section 3.4 ("Example of QSPEC Processing") of the QSPEC draft (http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-nsis-qspec-24#section-3.4).
 
Thanks,
Jerry

--- On Mon, 3/1/10, Gerald Ash <[e-mail]> wrote:


From: Gerald Ash <[e-mail]>
Subject: Re: [NSIS] Last Call: draft-ietf-nsis-rmd (RMD-QOSM - The Resource Management in Diffserv QOS Model) to Experimental RFC
To: [e-mail], [e-mail]
Cc: "Jerry Ash" <[e-mail]>
Date: Monday, March 1, 2010, 2:20 PM







Minor editorial comments:
 
1. page 35:
"  the "Peak Data Rate-1 (p)" value of the <Bandwdith> parameter.
   When the QNE edges use aggregated intra-domain QoS-NSLP operational
   states, then the "Peak Data Rate-1 (p)" value of the <Bandwdith>"
substitute <TMOD-1> for <Bandwdith> 
 
2. page 101:
"  directions by using the procedure described in Section 4.6.2.3 and
   including in the  <Bandwith> parameter within the "RMD-QOSM QOS
   Description" field carried by the "forward" intra-domain RESERVE the"
substitute <TMOD-1> for <Bandwith>
 
Thanks,
Jerry


--- On Mon, 3/1/10, The IESG <[e-mail]> wrote:


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Subject: [NSIS] Last Call: draft-ietf-nsis-rmd (RMD-QOSM - The Resource Management in Diffserv QOS Model) to Experimental RFC
To: "IETF-Announce" <[e-mail]>
Cc: [e-mail]
Date: Monday, March 1, 2010, 9:38 AM


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